Comments for Another Lost Shark

Comment on Shisan: My Aching Back (Link #4 – #5) by Jonathan

Jonathan — Wed, 22 May 2013 06:44:03 +0000

not even the radio
tonight
a bus passes

patriciaipsa — Wed, 22 May 2013 03:05:03 +0000

# 5
journey back
to blacks barred from town
backyard games

thecityhermit — Wed, 22 May 2013 00:28:19 +0000

I regret
the light switch
cockroaches

claudia — Tue, 21 May 2013 15:18:06 +0000

cool…love how it develops

Simon Kindt — Tue, 21 May 2013 11:48:47 +0000

poetry calls
but the marking pile grows
the teacher reaches for the blowtorch

Sorry… Couldn’t resist

Gabrielle Bryden — Tue, 21 May 2013 00:40:05 +0000

gotta love the wetlands The fourth one is my favourite – we’re getting a lot of kites around here lately (eating all the field mice I think)

slpmartin — Mon, 20 May 2013 15:06:12 +0000

Oh…that first one was just brilliant IMHO.

claudia — Mon, 20 May 2013 12:42:56 +0000

cool….love the seeing the future in river mud and the kite whistling there in the end..nice..

JdUb — Mon, 20 May 2013 12:18:12 +0000

#4
Apollo rides
a WW-winter storm

White Tower crenellations
traitors’ moon

our discontent
toenail clipping before dawn

Jonathan — Mon, 20 May 2013 12:06:15 +0000

no sound
from the starry night