New Junicho: Between Thistles (Links #9 – #10)

Responses to Link #10:

It was a thrill to see the energy of the gendai phase continue; the verse on offer for link #10 vary from the wonderfully  satirical, ‘Mad Katter’s tea party’ (John) and ‘budgie’s snuggle’ (Trish), through the razor sharp political commentary of ‘a new man rises’ (Phillip), the deep resonance of ‘soldier biscuits for sale’ (Chris) and the natural beauty of ‘election promises’ (Vuong).

After reading each poem multiple times, I became overwhelmed at the state of politics in our nation. Such is the power of so many of the links submitted; and in this power lies possibility. The Junicho would be richer for the addition of many of these poems, but there must be one that owns the 10th position and propels us towards an ending…

There are two poems that I have juggled for a number of hours now; placing each one into the Junicho, reading and re-reading the complete poem and then considering where it could lead us… the two poems are Chris’s ‘soldier biscuits for sale’  and Phillip’s ‘a new man rises’. In making my choice, I have decided to go with the directness of Phillip’s link and the energy it generates in leaping forward from Cindy’s ‘waking up’. The use of the word rises is the engine that propels this poem and while I might be showing my political leanings with this selection, this startling image confirmed my fear of the long winter we may wake to post the upcoming federal election…

I will, however, make one edit to the poem, and that is the removal of the brackets around the second line. It is my belief that the poem works more powerfully without them.

So with link #10 decided, link #11 is now open. Link #11 completes the six cultural links by calling for 3 lines with a music reference. After witnessing the uninhibited energy of Black Sabbath last night, I am eager to hear how each of you will make your words sing.

Take the leap and spread the word…

*****

Between Thistles: A New Junicho
Started: 12 April 2013 – Finished:
Written between:
Ashley Capes, Simon Kindt, Chloe Callistemon, Chris Lynch, Trish Reid, John Wainwright, Lee-Anne Davie, Andrew Phillips, Cindy Keong, Phillip Ellis,

Link #1 (3 lines) – hokku / shasei

between thistles
the crane’s
Egyptian walk

(Ashley Capes)

Link #2 (2 lines) – waki / cultural (literature)

the noose of a circling skein
called down by Carver’s barreled goose

(Simon Kindt)

Link #3 (3 lines) – daisan / cultural (film)

fan rotors beat
The End
to the smell of napalm

(Chloe Callistemon)

Link #4 (2 lines) – verse / shasei

recycling at 2:30am
moonlight on bitumen

(Chris Lynch)

Link #5 (3 lines) – verse / shasei

moth seeks out
only dark spaces
tired I turn off the light

(Trish Reid)

Link #6 (2 lines) – verse / cultural (art)

Caravaggio fades in from black
is that a pallet knife?

(John Wainwright)

Link #7 (3 lines) – verse / cultural (religion)

he makes the sign
with crossed fingers
crucifix

(Lee-Anne Davie)

Link #8 (2 lines) – verse / gendai

global autumn
H5N1 migrates

(Andrew Phillips)

Link #9 (3 lines) – verse / gendai

waking up
with winter
beside me

(Cindy Keong)

Link #10 (2 lines) – verse / cultural (politics)

a new man rises
such rough beast

(Phillip Ellis)

Link #11 (3 lines) – verse / cultural (music)
Link #12 (2 lines) – ageku / shasei

* shasei – sketched from life – lived experience, observational, uncontrived.
* gendai – modernist – atypical structure, tone or content.

*****

Response to Link #9:

I am just home after two massive nights of poetry (one launching Brisbane New Voices IV, which I will share details of very soon), and am eager to keep the Junicho moving. That said, my eyes are finding it hard to focus, so tonight, I am going to keep it brief…

Again, I have been swept away by the playful energy of the poems on offer for link #9. I have been checking in regularly and this gendai section has given me a genuine rush.

Many of these poems have seeded themselves in my brain, keeping me company and filling my head with their wildness. Several, will remain there for a long time… such is their resonance.

These poems include, Trish’s ‘she misses his cheek’, Cindy’s ‘waking up’, Chris’s ‘fever sweats’ and John’s uproarious, ‘number nine’.

So which one has made the leap into Between Thistles… for link #9 I have decided to wake up with winter and in doing so, welcome Cindy into the Junicho.

This means, we are now calling for link #10 – 2 lines with a political theme. I’ve got a feeling this one is going to keep the freewheeling energy of the last two links!

Leap boldly,

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25 responses to “New Junicho: Between Thistles (Links #9 – #10)

  1. white rabbit or red queen
    mama mia! mama mia!

  2. phillipaellis1968

    link #10:

    a new man rises
    (such rough beast)

  3. overboard
    opportunity drifts

  4. Vuong Pham

    Link # 10

    election promises
    apple blossom in winter

    or

    global warming
    my GUCCI wallet cracks

  5. link #10

    love phillip’s take on this but couldn’t resist

    budgies snuggle
    up Bunny

  6. soldier biscuits for sale
    remembering the taste

  7. ladpoetry

    left, right, left, right
    the debate marches, out of step

    Provided by my friend Pete Callaghan.

  8. Channelling a bit of George Bush tonight…

    # 10
    90% spent on women and drink
    the rest wasted

  9. #10
    Spring of nations
    still waiting

  10. politically homeless?
    I have a badge for you

  11. #11
    moshing
    the sparks fly
    upward

  12. #11
    valkyrie ride
    in sleeveless leather
    forever young and gay

  13. Andy Smerdon

    Link #11

    delta blue
    souls tuned
    the crossroads

    • Andy Smerdon

      #11
      herald the beast
      bind your soul
      at the crossroads

      #11
      at the crossroads
      herald the beast
      the unknown awaits

      #11
      bind your soul
      to the beast that waits
      at the crossroads

  14. #11 – found version

    all your life you were only
    looking at ghosts and empty sockets
    and I think its kind of sad

  15. #11 – sixties version

    the Mods won the
    Battle of Brighton Beach
    The Who?

  16. Too many? Too bad… :)

    #11

    two discords
    string me
    to this skeleton dance

    second chord
    of the Elgar
    snaps my bow

    to have been
    two hands clapping
    with Freddie

    snort awake
    to the boom
    of Beethoven’s cannon

  17. link #11:

    a familiar refrain:
    I am the master
    of the universe

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