Our recent ginko through Karawatha Forest has spun off into a summer ginko. The group have been sparking off each other, resulting in some really exciting leaps. Here’s the first quarter of Snake Weather, written by / between: David Stavanger, Andy Smerdon, Cindy Keong, Katherine Battersby, Chris Lynch, Trish Reid, John Wainwright, Helen Ross, Andrew Phillips.
[photograph by Cindy Keong]
snake weather
he kisses his teenage daughter
on the mouth
DS
*
storm clouds hide
an innocent sky
AS
*
at the roadside
the empty arms
of a mother
CK
*
cane fields watch
with a promise of fire
KB
*
she bleeds out
in the back paddock
harvest moon
CL
*
red flowers falling
they await the results
TR
*
black parrots’ beaks
in the heliconia
skeletons rise from the woods
JW
*
limbs entwine
love whispers its melody
HR
*
she falls back
breathless into lounge arms
rolling credits
AP


very cool collection…i’m always amazed at how much can be said with such few words..always a big challenge for me…smiles
These guys are really firing!
This is looking amazing – the first quarter came together beautifully; looking forward to more
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