Friday Night Lights Project: Week #37

As we enter into the final quarter of the project, the passion for this project is unwavering… Last night, I had the pleasure of watching Cindy on location in an exquisitely lit alleyway in Brisbane, so seeing the shots this morning gave me an unexpected rush. And the knowledge that Saturday morning means a new poem in my inbox from Ashley is also an endless thrill. Fifteen weeks remaining… so while it lasts, let the light in!

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I might
ride with the motorbike courier
deliver the architect’s plans
for a site
for grief
I would
use extra light to show all
imperfections
in the entry way, done
in a high gloss
I might
study crabs’ ability to use color
to distinguish food from poison
I would
concern myself
with this renewal of spying powers
with this killed ambassador
I might
attend to far away things.

AM

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CK

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for Thomas 

The slow moving river in Spring
where water lilies flower and tadpoles
bubble into frogs.

My son’s body joins their reflections
his wooden boat slipping into mid-
stream, and though I step down
into brown water that smells
of old milk tea, I cannot reach it:
my Casuarina branch only stirs
the water and propels the boat onwards.

He smiles and lifts his arms
as if it doesn’t matter;
my feet grip in the mud.

I think of Moses, drawn from the bulrushes
and how many other babies have sailed
down rivers to a lesser fate.

Then I’m back here watching the boat
drift through this shimmering day
struggling with the sudden weight
of fatherhood, as my son waves
and gurgles his sweet goodbye song.

GN

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5 Responses to Friday Night Lights Project: Week #37

  1. misswoodhouse

    Only fifteen more weeks?!?!? I have to start savoring each second, then! Love this week’s result, the old milk tea water, the colors in Cindy’s photo, everything.

  2. I think this week is the best one yet, however, it seems whichever week I’m reading I think it’s the best.

  3. there’s a weight to father or motherhood that can be overwhelming at times…keep loving him, that’s the best we can do as parents

  4. Ah that last stanza really was my favorite..the poem painted such fine images for the mind’s eye.

  5. Cindy was having a lot of creative fun in that alleyway
    Beautiful poem, Graham – love “tadpoles bubble into frogs.”
    Ashley’s poem is an intriguing observation on observation (the way I read it :) )

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