Friday Night Lights Project: Week #18

Saturday morning has settled in all of its autumnal glory, but let’s darken the sky again momentarily as Ashley, Cindy and I relive the lights of Friday night gone.

**********

Tonight is the last school dance.
Boys and girls spill from parents’ cars
not thinking of this as an exit

from a second womb
the arrival is sleek
flat-ironed hair and they weigh
almost nothing in their lightness.

AM

**********

CK

**********

Three Doors Down

i.

Her voice was like a car tyre burning
loud enough to change the shape of her body
dark enough to fill the cupboard with secrets.

ii.

We all said the bastard should have done time:
broke and entered her every night.

iii.

At dawn, the silence was long; the rope was short.

GN

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13 Responses to Friday Night Lights Project: Week #18

  1. Three Doors Down – HOLYFUCKWOW.

  2. Brilliant! How long is a rated piece of fuse wire?

  3. and they weigh
    almost nothing in their lightness…this is gorgeous..

    and your piece was like a punch in the stomach…excellently done graham

  4. brucedorlova

    once again, a powerful synchronicity here. GN, i felt yours like a blow.

  5. Gees you can feel the air in these three. They sit beside each other like streets in a suburb. Great Friday night lights!

  6. The innocence of hope and the mangling and destruction of that innocence – the photo is pretty apt too

    • gnunn

      thanks BB, the three works always seem to tie together so well. continues to blow my mind how well the project works.

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