The First 30: Day 21

the first thin notes
of hunger call the cat
from the window, where
she has waited all night
for a breeze

and having survived
the murderous heat
she paws her way along
the sill, looks down
and mewls deeply

as you swoop in
and lift him to
your chest, all
three of you cursing
the slow drip of milk

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5 Responses to The First 30: Day 21

  1. Bloody brilliant (and just a bit funny – haha) – your mind works in mysterious ways.

  2. Fantastic Graham. In every sense. I love the tenderness that is felt through. Great feeling of ease at reading

  3. Ah…the last two lines really made me chuckle…what a scene you’ve created with these words…very delightful.

  4. ah i can see the scene..and as a mother who did breastfeed three kids..i can also feel it..smiles

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