The First 30: Day 13

8 Responses to The First 30: Day 13

1. Audra

   November 24, 2011 at 2:15 pm

   I love the simplicity and the elegance of this poem; and yet powerfully emotive.

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2. slpmartin

   November 24, 2011 at 2:40 pm

   Oh I am loving these verses engendered by him…I wonder what he will say about these when he begins his on writing.

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3. Gabrielle Bryden

   November 24, 2011 at 4:41 pm

   Brilliant poem!

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4. Ashley Oakes Martin

   November 24, 2011 at 10:32 pm

   Love turning this one around and around in my head!

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5. claudia

   November 25, 2011 at 2:49 am

   smiles…my first daughter was no quiet force…she was a rocket with the voice of a sirene…haha… already 13 days old your boy..wow…beauty..

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6. tipota

   November 25, 2011 at 4:33 am

   so exquisite it brought a tear to my eye graham

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7. Thomas Davis

   November 26, 2011 at 1:16 pm

   This is wonderful, although having horses cut from dreams seems like a powerful cutting that could change the universe.

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8. Maggie Emmett

   November 29, 2011 at 5:00 am

   He is the net trawling
   your ocean floor

   as current strengthens
   silver-scale flashes

   catch him waiting
   for the morning tide.

   © M.L.Emmett

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