morning ritual
gargling in tune
with the crows
learning tai-chi
the cormorant holds his position
longer
leaning further
into morning
old poinciana
morning ritual
gargling in tune
with the crows
learning tai-chi
the cormorant holds his position
longer
leaning further
into morning
old poinciana
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“learning tai-chi
the cormorant holds his position
longer”
what a fantastic hook to hang all this on.
the rhythm is superb. fine, fine writing, gnunn.
Thanks Bruce. Those birds are so still…
yes, that is a great closer in the cormorant one
I wish I could lean further into morning!
Such a rich seam in the day.. well mined!
and yes.. can’t help but smile
at the way you’ve caught/wrought the cormorant.
A.Joy
Thanks Amanda. Glad those poems captured that time of day.