You can make music
of anything, I am certain.
Leaves in the gutter,
the clay bowl with one
green apple inside
waiting to be bitten.
Even of silence;
the piano’s worn ivory
asleep in the tips
of your fingers.
Not knowing how to move,
I trace your lips
until a mouth exists.
My fingers, hammers
made, then broken
as you, half-remembering
you are not alone in this room
take me in your arms
and when everything is still
teach me to play.

I love the way your poetry sits in these spaces, between the corporeal and the spiritual, indivisibly and so neatly traced.
It brings to mind the poetry of Octavio Paz.
That is high praise. Thanks Amanda!
Amanda is right. On one level a short discourse on love for another and yet, on another, reaching into the spiritual recesses of the reader’s mind and imploring them to continue with their own discoveries.
Thanks SS. Discovery and wonderment are crucial in reaching into the deeper water.
beautiful imagery… wonderfully done
Thanks Sarah.
wow – the first stanzas especially – hope this one’s going in the new collection?
Still undecided as to whether it will make the new collection, but it is definitely being considered.